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Bug #340116

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FIXED FORMAT full Rodina datastick English error report

Added by John Smith over 9 years ago.

Status:
New
Priority:
Normal
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Description

Capitalization errors or missing English augments are pinpointed with: >>>target error<<<.
Missing spaces and typos are pinpoined with capital letters: TARGET ERROR
Text that is fully underlined is an additional note for the lines preceding the error: note following target error

NOTICE: Sentences that end with an unnecessary space before the sentence-ending character seem to all be with a word typed with italic font, piloting the assumption that this is not an English error, but a text-conversion issue with how Rodina handled the original story files. However, this frequently listed issue is still marked under "Typos"

NOTICE: If a quote with an English error already has (an) entire word(s) fully capitalized nearby the pinpoined English error, then the English error will instead be pinpointed with >>>TARGET ERROR<<< to better specifiy what is being considered an error within the quoted text

Start of report
---*Start of Archive-stored datasticks*
1) A Traveling Child's Guide to Holidays

Missing spaces:
1(LAUNCHDAYOR "T-0 Day"
2(as it is sometimes CALLEDIS a celebration of)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
2) An Intimate Academic Evening with Malcolm McCreedy - 1/5

Missing spaces:
1(an ethical HAZARDOR an ethical)
2(came as a result OFAHDEFECATION?)
3(Our producing is MOTIONINGYES, we'll take)

Typos:
1(many of our STUDENT wonder..)
2(he shuffles PAPERS a stack of papers in his lap)
3(Where DID that drink girl?)
4(thinker and Nobel-Custic Prize>>>missing hyphen<<<winning physicist Malcom McCreedy) If this hyphen does not belong, then the original use of it at the beginning of the datastick is improper

Improper capitalizations:
1(That's technology! Am >>>i<<< right?)
---
3) An Intimate Academic Evening with Malcolm McCreedy - 2/5

Missing spaces:
1(Finsraw: AH,OF course. This is the)
2(Sorry. Yes. It's JUSTYOU put is so evocatively,)
3(I have recently BEENLET'S say strongly)
4(the several MILLIONBILLION?VIEWERS, and Cookshaw's excellent)
5(been doing he same THINGBAKING the same)
6(the same BREADFORD so long, that they)
7(I don't UNDERSTANDHOW do the mice)

Typos:
1(and Nobel-Custis Prize>>>no hyphen<<<winning physicist Malcolm McCreedy.) If this hyphen does not belong, then the original use of it at the beginning of the first datastick (1/5) is improper
2(eventually bring us the wondrous LIMINAL drive.) If this is supposed to indicate Finsraw is uneducated in this field, then this is not an error
3(Something unheard of>>>..<<<I don't know, let's) If the third dot was deliberately left out to imply this is a smaller-than-usual ellipsis, then this is not an error

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
4) An Intimate Academic Evening with Malcolm McCreedy - 3/5

Missing spaces:
1(Finsraw: AHHIS this)
2(Finsraw: SOYES. Let me)
3(as an eminent theoretical PHYSICISTPOSSIBLY the eminent)
4(the eminent theoretical PHYSICISTPERHAPS you could try)
5(Student: Sir? UHIT'S excreted, uh, solid)
6(brightest minds of our GENERATIONOF any)
7(any GENERATIONHIDDEN like an unpolished)
8(from professions that are SIMILARLYIF you will excuse the)
9(you will excuse the TERMINTELLECTUALLY impoverished.)
10(Finsraw, I'm sorry. IT'SSOMETIMES you're just so)
11(admirable that you are SOENAMORED with your roots.)
12(never answered my original QUESTIONPERHAPS the question of)
13(the question of this INTERVIEWWHAT is the Limnal drive?)

Typos:
1(thinker and Nobel-Custic Prize>>>no hyphen<<<winning physicist Malcolm McCreedy.) If this hyphen does not belong, then the original use of it at the beginning of the first datastick (1/5) is improper
2(It's the feces>>>no comma<<< all that mass that's the)
3(Finsraw: If I may, DOCTOMALCOLM. I think it's)
4(finsraw begins chuckling UNCERTAINTY along with mccreedy)
5( McCreedy: *CAN WE JUST*can she just bring the whole bottle this time?)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
5) An Intimate Academic Evening with Malcolm McCreedy - 4/5

Missing spaces:
1(possibly manage these INCREDIBLYFRANKLY, impossiblevelocities?)
2(these incrediblyfrankly, IMPOSSIBLEVELOCITIES?)
3(we leverage zero-point in your EQUATIONSIS it safe to just)
4(Student: SOIS it? Smart, I mean. To use it.)

Typos:
1(thinker and Nobel-Custic Prize>>>no hyphen<<<winning physicist Malcolm McCreedy.) If this hyphen does not belong, then the original use of it at the beginning of the first datastick (1/5) is improper
2(the universe balances things out BY makes the ship goes really really fast.) If McCreedy is deliberately using improper grammar as a form of condescension, then this is not improper
3(balances things out by makes the ship GOES really really fast.) If McCreedy is deliberately using improper grammar as a form of condescension, then this is not improper
4(from Einstein. I just kind UP picked it up and ran with it.)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
6) An Intimate Academic Evening with Malcolm McCreedy -5/5

Missing spaces:
1(No. Not you either. Boring. Next..NEXT.OK, here we go.)
2(Finsraw: WELLSURPRISES. Lots of surprises. Banter.)

Typos:
1(thinker and Nobel-Custic Prize>>>no hyphen<<<winning physicist Malcolm McCreedy.) If this hyphen does not belong, then the original use of it at the beginning of the first datastick (1/5) is improper
2(McCreedy: I >>>do.?<<< Ok, but I mean contractually)
3(Zjelko Radost. I have >>>missing word 'a'<<<major of 'Theoretical Concepts of Theories'.) If the word 'a' was left out intentionally to further emphasize that the character 'Radost' is foreign, then this is not improper
4(finishes and points decisively at radoist McCreedy: >>>.*<<< question.)
5(key steps to actually implementing *AN
Limnal drive,)
6(No. Not you either. Boring. Next>>>..<<<next.ok, here we go.) If the third dot was left out deliberately to imply a smaller-than-usual ellipsis, then this is not improper
7(finsraw START coughing violently, and madly)
8(thinker and Nobel-Custic Prize>>>no hyphen<<<winning physicist Malcolm McCreedy.) If this hyphen does not belong, then the original use of it at the beginning of the first datastick (1/5) is improper
9(doctor for a LOVEL Y evening and I'm sorry it's)
10(thinker and Nobel-Custic Prize>>>no hyphen<<<winning physicist Malcolm McCreedy.) If this hyphen does not belong, then the original use of it at the beginning of the first datastick (1/5) is improper

Improper capitalizations:
1(have waited a long time for this, and >>>i'm<<< sure they're just teeming)
---
7) Anomalies in the signal feed - let me know what you think - 3/3

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(got one more short BUST of traffic.) If the word 'bust' was used deliberately and is trying to describe a large 'break' of traffic or another less-clear or common description, then this is not improper If the word 'burst' was misspelled deliberately to give more realism to the fact this datastick was sent from an "iMoblImplant" then this is not improper

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
8) At the spaceport - 1/3

Missing spaces:
1(high-fived me completely UNBIDDENAS I write this.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
9) At the spaceport - 2/3

Missing spaces:
1(someone least of all IHAD malicious intent?)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
10) At the spaceport - 3/3

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(As soon as >>>i<<< send this, I'm emptying)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
11) F-A Daily Chronicle Coverage - Molten Alloy and Torn Lace - 1/2

Missing spaces:
1(To even describe some of the PASSAGESTHE things automatons and)
2(things automatons and humans are DOINGIS grossly inappropriate.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
12) Global Bosonic Product Sales Patter Cheat-SHeet - 3/3

Missing spaces:
1( But just between you and MESOMETIMES I looks into)

Typos:
1(just between you and mesomtimes I LOOKS into the eyes of one of)
2(semi-intelligent pets, or they SEEM them as dangerous tools that,)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
13) Grinding Terror - A Young Adult Horror Compilation - 1/3

Missing spaces:
1(They must be right at my HEELSHE'S waiting until)

Typos:
1(Almost there, THOUGH Jana. Almost there.)
2(bloody stumps in mere seconds BUY the horrors at her heels.)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
14) Grinding Terror - A Young Adult Horror Compilation - 2/3

Missing spaces:
1(Give ourselves up to THOSETHINGS?")

Typos:
1("What then?" said one OFF the other men.)
2(from this place! Away from >>>those. <<<things!") This is either an ellipsis accidentally made a period, or an improper capitalization alongside improper grammar. This dubiety will therefore only have this issue marked once

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
15) Grinding Terror - A Young Adult Horror Compilation - 3/3

Missing spaces:
1(stunt his empathetic MATURITYPARTICULARLY with regards to)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
16) Idris Kennedy - Personal Logs and Effects - 1/4

Missing spaces:
1(fresh set of eyes on your WORKOR maybe just to talk)
2(It's HERE!THE woman finally came through.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
17) Idris Kennedy - Personal Logs and Effects - 2/4

Missing spaces:
1(wrapped in steel and polymer SHELLA clear echo of the Romanesque)
2(and the way she said THEMIT went far beyond anything I)
3(repay you any way at ALLI am at your beck and call.)
4(start to finish, but to MEMUCH to be done.)
5(thought of her pawing around in THEREAND pawing at other things,)
6(pawing at other things, I IMAGINEIS repellent to me.)

Typos:
1('living statue' consisting of A automaton wrapped in)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
18) Idris Kennedy - Personal Logs and Effects - 3/4

Missing spaces:
1(middle of the room stood a FACEMY face, six feet)
2(stood a facemy face, six feet TALLRENDERED in wood and)
3(Spring opening, and it WASAS alwaysa triumph.)
4(Spring opening, and it wasas ALWAYSA triumph.)
5(alwaysa triumph. You continue to AMAZEYOUR idea of)

Typos:
1(unsettled at the idea of A automaton-human collaboration?)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
19) In Defense of the Same - 1/4

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(I asked him what WE had discovered,) This should be 'he' instead of 'we' considering the indirect object stated in the sentences prior

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
20) In Defense of the Same - 3/4

Missing spaces:
1(You will SAYYOU, who are still wild-eyed with)
2(for the "new", for "ADVENTURE"YOU will say)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
21) In Defense of the Same - 4/4

Missing spaces:
1(understand how these people THINKTHERE'S going to come a day when)

Typos:
1(You say "we must go >>>faster!".<<< No. I say we must) A period at the end of a quote ending in an exclamation point is unnecessary. If in this particular case it is necessary, then the following quote prior is improper
1-2("every screen program is the same, nowadays! We need variety!" Why? I watch the screen and)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
22) Intro to Space Sciences - 2nd Grade Edition

Missing spaces:
1(our ancestors knew about ITBEFORE the Little Bump even)
2(you notice that you moved TOOIN the opposite direction ?)

Typos:
1(notice that you moved tooin the opposite direction>>> <<Unnecessary space at end of sentence
2(would have to sit up and take notice>>> <<<!) [+Unnecessary space at end of sentence+]

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
23) Mother Goose's New Tales for Traveling Children - 2/4

Missing spaces: 0

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations:
1(lives on the other moon! If >>>i<<< may ride you,)
---
24) Mother Goose's New Tales for Traveling Children - 3/4

Missing spaces: 0

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations:
1("But what will I eat, if >>>i<<< have no space oats?")
2(feet and cried, "But if >>>i<<< don't have space oats,)
---
25) Mother Goose's New Tales for Traveling Children - 4/4

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1("Yaaay!>>>no close-quotes<<< said Molly the Space Unicorn,)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
26) Open Casting Call - Refractive Entertainment - 1/2

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(newest and largest GAMEATORUIMS (maximum seating capacity 80,000).)
2(Do not believe anything AUOMATRON says.)
3(Category 4 (Bad Outcome) media event. >>>I I<<< certify that I am) Unnecessary second 'I'
4(penalties clause in this CONTACT.) While this datastick appears to originate from a congratulatory pamphlet or other form of 'contacting' said contestant, this still feels as though it is a typing error from how the sentence is worded, as well as the spelling used in 2/2

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
27) Open Casting Call - Refractive Entertainment - 2/2

Missing spaces:
1(to two pieces of FANMAILON cameraduring each day)
2(two pieces of fanmailon CAMERADURING each day of)
3(Our viewership ENJOYSAND more importantly rewards a)

Typos:
1(Category 3 (Augmented Morality) media event. >>>I I<<< certify that I am a) Unnecessary second 'I'

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
28) Psych eval results for Mila (plus shopping list) - 1/5

Missing spaces:
1(not the kind-of small ONESTHEY don't hold tight)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
29) Psych eval results for Mila (plus shopping list) - 5/5

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(Did you know Mona could feel joy>>> <<Unnecessary space before question mark
2(spends more time with Mila than YOU, DO and Mila) Unnecessary comma

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
30) Remarks Made During the Funeral Of Florian Fyodorov

Missing spaces:
1(the terror of that. And yet I KNOWI know that if you were to)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
31) Rodina-Bradford Ship to Ship Transmission Logs - 1/3

Missing spaces:
1(lots of terraforming supplies with USYOU can totally borrow)
2(totally borrow SOME!AND we have a lot of)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
32) Rodina-Bradford Ship to Ship Transmission Logs - 3/3

Missing spaces:
1(they look exactly like >>>DC-8syou<<< know, the aviation machines)

Typos:
1(cost us fifty years minimum>>> <<<!) Unnecessary space before exclamation

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
33) Runaway - 1/4

Missing spaces:
1(He said it over and OVER"SHE'S a good one. She's a good)
2(good one. She's a good ONE"UNTIL it became unnerving to)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
34) Runaway - 2/4

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1("You are not a strong SWIMMING, Anica. And there is)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
35) Runaway - 4/4

Missing spaces:
1(said Anica's mother. "JUSTPLEASE wait in your alcove until)

Typos:
1(Eventually Anica lost INTERESTED in the questions, and ran off to)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
36) Signals Command - Public Duty Log - 1/2

Missing spaces:
1(to go to hell if you WANTBUT we are almost out of probes.)
2(Per the established PROCEDURESWHICH I am the apparently the)
3(planetary body on the far ENDI forget the designation.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
37) Signals Command - Public Duty Log - 2/2

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(Are you a friend>>>*!*<<< I see you! Hello Friend?) Exclamation point should be question mark
2(I look for things! Martin Signal>>> <<<Man said") Missing hyphen when compared to previous spelling of 'Signal-Man' in same transmission

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
38) Speech Transcript - 275th annual 'Stay the Course' gala - 1/3

Missing spaces:
1(Credits needed TOIN his words"eradicate)
2(needed toin his WORDS"ERADICATE destabilizing cultural references and)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
39) Speech Transcript - 275th annual 'Stay the Course' gala - 3/3

Missing spaces:
1(The variation in our genetic CODEA sign of health in any)
2(of health in any SPECIESIS reducing rapidly.)
3(give a somewhat less CONTROVERSIALBUT no less significantspeech)
4(less controversialbut no less SIGNIFICANTSPEECH in response to)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
40) Status report PAST DUE - please explain - 1/5

Missing spaces:
1(general attitudes. We remind YOUAGAINTHAT this venture was)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
41) Status report PAST DUE - please explain - 3/5

Missing spaces:
1(consider how many FAMILIESEARTH-based familiesare still)
2(many familiesEarth-based FAMILIESARE still living with crushing debts)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
42) Status report PAST DUE - please explain - 4/5

Missing spaces:
1(don't want to help us, WELLIT'S been fun. We're on our)

Typos:
1(signed up for this sacred journey to make money>>> <<Unnecessary space before question mark

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
43) Terraforming For Dummies - 2/4

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(Tell you when >>>missing word 'to'<<< sleep and when to wake up)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
44) Terraforming For Dummies - 4/4

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(forgot to build a stable society with a rule of law>>> <<<.) Unnecessary space before period
2(totally better for them THEN the one they currently have) Should be 'than'

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
45) The Inhumanity of Automatons - A Transcribed Interview - 1/2

Missing spaces:
1(Then his rather lengthy SPEECHTHE one right when the)
2(against the Mechanus BEGINSYOU'RE saying it's not simply)
3(is that a Bosonic entity is NOTCANNOTBE evil. Can their acts be)

Typos:
1((Note: audio recording BEINGS mid-interview))

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
46) The Inhumanity of Automatons - A Transcribed Interview - 2/2

Missing spaces:
1(collection of sensors that have been MACHINEDBY usto resemble)
2(sensors that have been machinedby USTO resemble a human face.)

Missing line space:
1(I say they are inevitable. Interviewer: Are you claiming that automatons are serial killers?) While colored properly to indicate a different character speaking, this quote is placed within Peal's final paragraph, and nearly looks as though it is part of his words. If this is intentional to imply Peal was cut off by the Interviewer, a hyphen or ellipsis should be used to end Peal's final sentence, instead of a period

Typos:
1(you mistakenly say "what a quick-thinking automaton!">>>.*<<< But they are not thinking:) Quote ended with a sentence-ending character '!'. Period unnecessary
2(It is a unique and purely >>>*a
<<< human error, but that) Unnecessary second 'a' to describe same direct object. Though this may still not be improper, just grammatically uncomfortable and thus a potential typing error

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
47) The Protocol - 1/6

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(and responds unpredictably TO TO the test set". Not really what you)
2(I still THINK THINK it's a hardware problem. Why else would)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
48) The Protcol - 3/6

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(running all of the behavioral unit TEST manually.) The word 'test' should be plural, or the word 'all' does not belong

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
49) The Protocol - 4/6

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(Probably someone trying to cover their ASSESS.) The word 'assess' does not fit here grammatically, and is thus assumed to be a typo for 'asses'
2(certainly hasn't been any kind of BREECH.) Unless the word 'breech' is used in a strange vague metaphorical manner, this word is considered a typo for 'breach'

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
50) The Protocol - 5/6

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(didn't know what to tell Maizey. She was sitting >>>missing word 'in'<<< the corner, coloring in the)

Improper capitalizations:
1(feel like I should explain what it is >>>i'm<<< doing to her,)
2(Maybe I don't want her to understand what >>>i've<<< done.)
---
51) The Protocol - 6/6

Missing spaces:
1(I wanted you TOGO to it like this," I said.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
52) Transmission Logs - Satellite Monitoring Base 42634-C - 1/4 As this datastick and it's following companions are implied to have been created by an apathetic Private, generally all English errors COULD be ignored, but will be listed anyway for convenience or if it is implied the Private is speaking into a device that converts into text automatically. In which case the following would still be considered English errors as it is beyond the suspension of disbelief that speech-to-text software developed in 2536 could make the mistakes listed below

Missing spaces: 0 that didn't seem deliberate, anyway

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations:
1(( note: >>>d<<<o i inventory the software, too?) Considered the start of a new sentence; should be capitalized
2(note: do >>>i<<< inventory the software, too?)
---
53) Transmission Logs - Satellite Monitoring Base 42634-C - 2/4

Missing spaces:
1(I regret that the RIGOROUSBUT fully necessarycommunication sweep)
2(that the rigorousbut fully NECESSARYCOMMUNICATION sweep protocol has left)
3(I haven't received ORDERSOR any communication from)
4(any communication from ANYONEFOR several months now.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations:
1(would like you to know that >>>i<<< deeply, deeply regret my)
---
54) Transmission Logs - Satellite Monitoring Base 42634-C - 3/4

Missing spaces:
1(went flying. They're everywhere NOWORBITING the room like a gigantic)
2(1 monitor with playback PANELHAVE you ever really watched Robinson Crusoe?) If this missing space is intentional to directly imply the speed at which Private Carnahan is speaking (similar to 1/4) then this is not improper

Typos:
1(lyrics to "Dancing on the Ceiling" SYNCH up exactly with) While 'sync' is more widely accepted as the abbreviation for 'synchronize', this technically is not improper but unlikely for a speech-to-text program to use in its software if such is to be implied for these datasticks

Improper capitalizations:
1(I thought >>>i<<< heard something on the comm array today.)
---
55) Transmission Logs - Satellite Monitoring Base 42634-C - 4/4

Missing spaces:
1(I have received APPROVALFROM very high up the chain of)
2(high up the chain of COMMANDTO break that radio silence today,)
3(to supplement your SOMEWHAT.LIMITEDCURRENT selection. See attached.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
56) URGENT - No More Racing!! - 1/3

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(am aghast. Someone has BE holding unauthorized)

Improper capitalizations:
---
57) URGENT - No More Racing!! - 2/3

Missing spaces:

Typos:
1(what would I say? "Sorry, captain, they're currently locked in mortal combat>>>*?*<<<" This question mark should be outside of the close-quotes

Improper capitalizations:
---
58) Upstairs-Downstairs Services Inc. Official meeting record - 1/3

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(if it actually happened for real back OR earth, or if madam just has a)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
59) Upstairs-Downstairs Services Inc. Official meeting record - 2/3

Missing spaces:
1(time they wake up nobody's going to REMEMBERHELL we might not even be alive to)
2(agree with everything you're SAYINGAND let me stress that neither I nor)

Typos:
1(take up more resources THAT the four million other passengers combined.)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
60) Upstairs-Downstairs Services Inc. Official meeting record - 3/3

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(rows of cubes, lights all blinking in SYNCH.) While 'sync' is more generally accepted for the abbreviation of 'synchronize', this is technically not improper, just uncommon and also unlikely for any sort of speech-to-text software implied to be responsible for creating this datastick in the 2600s

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
61) Wagon Master Election - Official Results - 3/4

Missing spaces:
1(think People's Assembly MEETINGSTAKE up too much of our time.)

Typos:
1(hear that you don't have time for Liberty>>> <<<. While you might) Unnecessary space before period
1(People Against Tyranny is not affiliated >>>missing word 'with'<<<the Party of Populars or Stanislaus Litvin)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
62) Wagon Master Election - Official Results - 4/4

Missing spaces:
1(as "probably unnecessary in the long RUNAND certainly expensive to maintain." Litvin later)
2(and while the people's VOICETHE Populars voicehas spoken, I)
3(voicethe Populars VOICEHAS spoken, I look forward to)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
63) What I Think About That - 1/5

Missing spaces:
1(I went down the DRUGSTORE the other morning to get)

Typos:
1(I went down >>>missing word 'to<<<the drugstore the other morning)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
64) What I Think About That - 2/5

Missing spaces:

Typos:

Improper capitalizations:
1(stay right here for a few years. If >>>i<<< can't convince you to)
---
65) What I Think About That - 3/5

Missing spaces:
1(And I figure ANYTHINGHUMAN or bosonicthat can put up with me)
2(figure anythinghuman or BOSONICTHAT can put up with me for longer than)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
66) What I Think About That - 4/5

Missing spaces:
1(off to bed when AutomaTron came ONWE were too young for that)
2(too young for that sort of THINGAND we'd listen to the explosions and)

Typos:
1(Hah! Starting to feel LIKE LIKE "Tired Old Media.")

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
67) What I Think About That - 5/5

Missing spaces:
1(one of these implant THINGIESAND that people would pay to read)

Typos:
1(suppose you have to BE A be an idealist to let in a grumpy old man)
2(>>>I<<< usually I start these things by talking about)

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
68) Xenos - Fact or Fiction - 1/2

Missing spaces:
1(he and his common-law wife SOUGHTUNSUCCESSFULLYTO find proof of extraterrestrial life.)

Typos: 0

Improper capitalizations: 0
---
69) Xenos - Fact or Fiction - 2/2

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(humans are a unique creation, ET CETERA. We are along, the) While the word comes from a latin phrase that is actually two words, the more commonly accepted spelling is 'etcetera' with no space. This is not technically improper, just uncommon and thus may be perceived as improper to less literate players. As this is spelled in this fashion deliberately multiple times, this will remain the only listing of 'et cetera'

Improper capitalizations: 0
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1) Encryped Communications - 1/12 The following datastick and its following companions have so many missing apostrophes, it may be easier to fix by proof-reading the each entire datastick and fixing each missing apostrophe as it appears, rather than relying on this report to pinpoint each error independently, as many are packed within the same few sentences of a paragraph. Some listed issues however are not missing apostrophes, and can be found below with asterisks '*' around their number for easier spotting

Missing spaces:
1(repelling fire from TWOCORRECTION, threeunknown vessels.)
2(repelling fire from twocorrection, THREEUNKNOWN vessels.)

Typos: Due to the sheer quantity of missing apostrophes, typos that are NOT missing apostrophes will have extra spacing around their number to better identify what is a unique error
1(WERE repelling fire from twocorrection,) Either this is a missing apostrophe, or the grammar-skipping utilized for the wording of this line made it look as though it was an English error. The individual does appear to be speaking in past-tense during these lines, however the event is later described in further detail as present-tense as the Encrpyed Communications file continues
2(The systems empty. WEVE got long-range data going back forty)
3(most of navigation in the first volley, so WERE flying blind.)
4(everyone on the starboard side. WERE trying to get some distance)
5(under convenient thrust but THEYRE right on us.)
6(IM not sure I understand what you want exactly.)
7(what you want exactly. WERE still five or six years away)

8(Repeat: xeno. E.T., little green men, xeno>>> <<<.) Unnecessary space at end of period

9(their transmitters with your comms. Do something>>> <<<.) Unnecessary space at end of period

10(with an untested trajectory? WEVE got millions of lives here)
11(of lives here and WERE not exactly nimble. Hold the)
12(If they break the encryption THEYLL have everything.)
13(all of our landing sites. YOURE screwing three generations of lives)
14(Three percent plating. ITS already done. Good luck, Rodina.)
15(frequency 43.69376. Your SURVIVALAND our survivaldepends on you)
16(Your survivaland our SURVIVALDEPENDS on you communicating with us.)

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2) Encrypted Communications - 2/12

Missing spaces: 0

Typos: Due to the sheer quantity of missing apostrophes, typos that are NOT missing apostrophes will have extra spacing around their number to better identify what is a unique error
1(hear you but IM not getting video feed. Are you ok?)
2(I think so. THERES a big glass display in front)
3(lot of numbers are yellow, but I DONT understand what)
4(but I dont understand what THEYRE saying. Is something wrong)
5(No THATS good. Its fine. Red is)
6(No thats good. ITS fine. Red is)
7(Red is bad, yellow is okay. ITS telling you how much oxygen)
8(have left, and whether or not THERES any damage to the pod.)
9(damage to the pod. YOURE going to be fine.)
10(I DONT understand whats going on. I just woke up and)
11(I dont understand WHATS going on. I just woke up and)
12(IM right here. Just keep breathing. Try to)
13(and they ejected the lifepods. IM not sure whats going on.)
14(ejected the lifepods. Im not sure WHATS going on.)
15(not sure whats going on. THERES all kinds of signal traffic)
16(none of it makes sense. IM trying to find out who else)

17(Survived? You mean people died>>> <<Unnecessary space before question mark

18(sound like a bear and YOURE going to burn through your oxygen)
19(your oxygen too quickly. ILL find out whats going on.)
20(Ill find out WHATS going on. Im not going anywhere.)
21(find out whats going on. IM not going anywhere.)
22(IM surprised it woke you up at all, the way you snore.)
23(I think it was destroyed, if IM reading this correctly.)
24(bed would be cold if you DIDNT. And you like my cooking.)
25(ITS a transmission from the Rodina. something about)
26(NO. >>>DONT<<< transmit anything. Whatever destroyed the)
27(I DONT even know what that means. Wouldnt Rodina, I)
28(what that means. WOULDNT Rodina, I dont know, send)
29(Wouldnt Rodina, I DONT know, send help or something?)
30(THEYRE not helping us. Were the ones at the front)
31(helping us. WERE the ones at the front of the line)
32(and breathe slower. ILL figure something out.)
33(Hush. Dancers CANT cook.)

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3) Encrypted Communications - 3/12

Missing spaces: 0

Typos:
1(have family currently boxed in RODINAS Sleeper Car.) Target error is possessive, and thus should have an apostrophe
2(last Rodina communication. WERE not sure if the enemy)
3(detect long-range transmissions. ITS not worth the risk.)
4(Ran, I mean. I DONT think any other senior staff made it)
5(staff made it out, so IT Im what weve got.)
6(staff made it out, so it IM what weve got.)
7(staff made it out, so it Im what WEVE got.)
8(Third, if YOURE in anything other than a lifepod,)
9(need mobile platforms if WERE going to survive.)
10(going to survive. If YOURE in a lifepod, sit tight.)
11(sit tight. WELL get you as soon as we have something)
12(DONT contact me asking about other passeners.)
13(other passengers. We DONT know who survived yet)
14(who survived yet and YOURE just putting yourself at risk.)
15(at risk. Yes, I know THATS callous, but I had family on)
16(DO NOT contact Rodina. I DONT care what Stan says)
17(brotherhood and community. DONT think his comment about the Sleep Car)
18(double for all of us. I DONT care if you really did win the lottery)
19(came up from Aft deck: YOURE with us now.)

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Missing spaces:
1(Big one looks like some kind OFBOX...thing.)

Typos: Due to the sheer quantity of missing apostrophes, typos that are NOT missing apostrophes will have extra spacing around their number to better identify what is a unique error
1(Hush Tavi. IM soldering wires and its very difficult)
2(Im soldering wires and ITS very difficult work.)
3(very difficult work. YOURE not running out of oxygen.)
4(and control circuits. IM trying to buy us more time.)
5(us more time. ITS very technical and you wouldnt)
6(very technicaly and you WOULDNT understand. Just hush my sweet.)
7(while we float in space. Why you WONT contact that Savitskaya woman?)

8(while we float in space. Why YOU WONT contact that Savitskaya woman?) The target-words should swop places or this is grammatically improper, unless this wording is deliberate to imply Tavi is foreign, in which case this characteristic dialogue, and thus not improper

9(Savitskaya woman? She seems to know WHATS what. Taking charge of)
10(I will when ITS safe. Were still too far)
11(when its safe. WERE still too far from the others.)
12(Besides I DONT trust that woman.)
13(Growing your algae all day long, but CANT spare a moment to cook it?)
14(just happens on its own? ITS art, what I do.)
15(art, what I do. IM an artist. I feed thousands!)
16(Five red dots. THEYRE getting bigger. Is that bad?)
17(Oh god Tavi, DONT joke with me here.)
18(IM not. Six red dots, now.)
19(Six red dots, now. THERES a big one at the edge)
20(DONT panic. Dont panic. Your pods too far away,)
21(Dont panic. DONT panic. Your pods too far away,)
22(Dont panic. Dont panic. Your PODS too far away,)
23(pods too far away, I CANT see that far)

24(pods too far away, I cant see that far>>>missing period<<<) If this missing period is deliberate to imply Tavi is cutting the speaker off before she can finish the sentence, then this is not improper, but still a unclear

25(Should I panic? IM going to panic now.)
26(I think IM moving...one of the little ones is)
27(DONT touch anything my sweet. Im coming.)
28(touch anything my sweet. IM coming. I think I can get)
29(No no, no. THEYLL see you. Stay there,)
30(would have killed me. THEYRE taking me somewhere.)
31(You stay hidden until THEYRE gone.)
32(then what, just leave you?? I WONT do...)
33(not some dancer! ITS pulling me closer to the big ship)
34(pretty, actually. YOURE right, you know.)
35(I should have cooked more. YOURE a pretty good cook.)

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5) Encrypted Communications - 5/12

Missing spaces:
1(was clear before: your >>>MISSIONYOUR<<< ONLY missionis retrieval of)
2(your missionyour ONLY >>>MISSIONIS<<< retrieval of the Vanguard core.)

Typos: Due to the sheer quantity of missing apostrophes, typos that are NOT missing apostrophes will have extra spacing around their number to better identify what is a unique error
1(a ships comm arrays but you >>>CANT<<< silence the IFF.)
2(of the Vanguard core. ITS in the other direction.)
3(Do you think we DIDNT build in safeguards?
4(build in safeguards? IM lightyears away, but I can still)
5(touch you. Convince me why I SHOULDNT.)

6(references to "Squassation Override>>>missing close-quote<<< we found buried in)

7(that survived the attack, and THEYRE all working on)
8(telling me about your stick, but I DONT hear any carrot yet.)
9(any carrot yet. WERE close to extinction here.)
10(IVE met with the Council fifteen times in the past)
11(what they think? They think YOURE a little girl playing at Commander.)
12(moment the Vanguard was lost. THEYVE already moved on to figuring out how)
13(bothering with you. HOWS that for a carrot.) |
14(bothering with you. Hows that for a carrot>>>*.*<<<) Period should be a question mark |
15(you can help me, and all IM doing right now is thinking up)
16(put me up instead. THATS what Im good at.)
17(me up instead. Thats what IM good at. Persuasion.)
18(at least one of them that YOURE leading them to their death?)
19(If that DOESNT work, Ill keep brainstorming new sticks)
20(If that doesnt work, ILL keep brainstorming new sticks)
21(same team. Tell me what YOURE doing, and tell me what you want.)
22(If you DIDNT need me, why are you still talking?)
23(do need me. I think YOURE terrified of an enemy force)
24(cracking that core. WHATS on it? Encryption keys?)
25(If YOURE watching, you can see that the xenos are)
26(survivors left and right. IM going to rescue them.)
27(rescue them. THERES a xeno light capital ship)
28(ship close to Veles. IM going to draw away its)
29(its fighter cover and then WERE boarding it.)
30(boarding it. IM getting my people back.)
31(draw off the fighter cover ISNT coming back, right?)
32(the kidnapped lifepods ARENT on that ship.)
33(on that ship. YOURE going after it because its fast)
34(after it because ITS fast enough to run and small enough to)
35(enough to hide. YOURE not rescuing anyone, youre saving)
36(rescuing anyone, YOURE saving yourself.)
37(ILL get you the signal intel, but youre not running)
38(the signal intel, but YOURE not running anywhere with that ship.)
39(with that ship. YOURE going to use it to help me get the core.)
40(and untrained colonists? IM not mocking you; thats a)
41(not mocking you; THATS a serious question.)
42(a serious question. I DONT have a military background.)
43(//You and I both know that the kidnapped lifepods ARENT on that ship.)
44(nubbin of a stick to use. WELL talk about the core once I)
45(A NUBBINS all I need, Val.)
46(ILL be in touch with intel for you in a few hours.)

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Missing spaces: 0

Typos: Due to the sheer quantity of missing apostrophes, typos that are NOT missing apostrophes will have extra spacing around their number to better identify what is a unique error
1(IM here. Is this secure?)
2(as I can make it. ITS microwave, so its detectable,)
3(Its microwave, so ITS detectable, but Im piggybacking on)
4(so its detectable, but IM piggybacking on the keepalive pings)
5(Trust me, I know what IM doing.)
6(of four sectors, but THERES a lot of space to cover.)
7(else in Signals will figure out what SHES up to.)
8(are packed so close they CANT move. Im well aware)
9(they cant move. IM well aware of what pain is.)
10(my contact is helping us, THEYLL put her out)
11(out the nearest airlock. SHES doing what she can.)
12(Fine. IM sorry. I cant think straight. Its the same)
13(Im sorry. I CANT think straight. Its the same over here.)
14(I cant think straight. ITS the same over here.)
15(oxygen meant for ten. This CANT go on. Anyways.)
16(few more transmissions between VALENTINAS command ship) Target-word is possessive, and thus requires an apostrophe
17(So you believe me, then. SHES up to something.)
18(I know SHES up to something. The question is what.)

19(puts on automatons, and I can definitely circumvent that>>> <<<.) Unnecessary space before period

20(that my contact identified: THEYRE all in the opposite direction.)
21(in the opposite direction. VALENTINAS lying about this)
22(csuka! Well then. ILL let you know when I have something.)

(>>>I'm sorry.<<<) http://youtu.be/7YaGwI7GjlA?t=3m28s Behold, Encryped Communications' first apostrophe is born!

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7) Encrypted Communications - 7/12

Missing spaces:
1(xeno light capital SHIPDESIGNATED target "Gammacurrently in)
2(capital shipdesignated target "GAMMACURRENTLY in orbit around Veles.)
3(inferior form of life we ENCOUNTERPLANT, animal,)
4(life we encounterplant, animal, ARTIFICIALTHROUGH our superior)

Typos: Due to the sheer quantity of missing apostrophes, typos that are NOT missing apostrophes will have extra spacing around their number to better identify what is a unique error from the repeated error
1(IM not great at these so Ill keep it brief.)
2(great at these so ILL keep it brief. In three hours)
3(In three hours IM ordering an assult of the xeno light)

4(capital shipdesignated target >>>"GAMMA<<<currently in orbit around Veles.) Missing close-quotes

5(in orbit around Veles. IVE already dispatched one of our)
6(will escort the SRTS Athos to >>>GAMMAS<<< starboard side.) Target-word is possessive, and thus requires an apostrophe
7(IVE ordered the SRTS Porthos and the command module to stay)
8(to provide logistical support. ILL direct the attack from)
9(Once Gamma is ours, WELL all rendezvous and make our escape.)
10(and do your jobs. I DIDNT ask for this command, but)
11(for this command, but ILL be damned if I let our people rot)
12(going to tell them whey they DONT find any prisoners)
13(IM forwarding our analysis of their escort fighters.)
14(as I noticed that YOURE leading from the rear on this)
15(DONT forget our deal.)
16(Any minute now. THEYRE handing out rifles.)
17(explain how to use them. ITS surreal.)
18(It DOESNT matter. Crack them, find out what)
19(find out what THEYRE up to, try to stop it.)
20(transfer you to Porthos. DONT go with them.)
21(they move in aggregate...*THEYRE* not animals.)
22(I DONT even think theyre one race: Im seeing)
23(I dont even think THEYRE one race: Im seeing at least)
24(theyre one race: IM seeing at least two distinct)
25(with different behaviors. And THEYRE fast. Faster than a human.)
26(the xenos can take. DONT go, Pendleton.)
27(ITS too late. And I dont care. Im tired.)
28(Its too late. And I DONT care. Im tired.)
29(Its too late. And I dont care. IM tired.)
30(Im tired. I CANT breath here. Keep going)
31(going without me. IM sending you the ID of my)
32(Protect her. IM trusting you here. Theres a)
33(trusting you here. THERES a message for her there, too.)

34(Ok. If you get on XENO THE ship, and there) Target-words should swop places, unless this is deliberate to imply that Alicja is foreign, in which case this is characteristic dialogue, and not improper

35(Alicja, there ARENT. You know that.)

36(But if there are>>> <<<. Hes 175cm tall,) Unnecessary space after period

37(But if there are . HES 175cm tall, gray hair,)
38(left knee is bad. He says it ISNT but it is,)
39(may need to help him walk. He WONT...)
40(SOMETHINGS happening. I think its time. Good luck.)
41(Somethings happening. I think ITS time. Good luck.)
42(THEYRE sending me on the assault and I dont think)
43(me on the assault and I DONT think Im coming back.)
44(and I dont think IM coming back.)
45(in a way. But I CANT handle you dying.)
46(I made the wrong decision. IM sorry.)
47(Val? WHATS happening? Im getting reports of)
48(Whats happening? IM getting reports of explosions.)

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Missing spaces:
1(I dont think your HUSBANDWHAT was his name?I dont think hed)
2(your husbandwhat was his NAME?I dont think hed understand either.)

Typos: Due to the sheer quantity of missing apostrophes, typos that are NOT missing apostrophes will have extra spacing around their number to better identify what is a unique error from the repeated error
1(They are buried. Figuratively. THERES nothing we can do from here.)

2(were destroyed. We were euthanized>>> <<<.) Unnecessary space before period

3(comrades were destroyed. WERE still here.)
4(for maybe a week, if WERE careful, but that doesnt matter)
5(if were careful, but that DOESNT matter because we have only)
6(we have some mobility. THATS not nothing. Plus whatever cargo)
7(Vanguard destruction. ITS scattered across the system)
8(Tibor: WERE going to die here. Right here.)
9(was looking for, but at least YOURE trying. Listen, I)
10(You know why? YOURE my engineers. Problem solvers.)
11(making planetfall? WERE close enough to Jarilo.)
12(to Jarilo. Tibor, YOURE the planetologist: is it life-supporting?)
13(Sort of. ITS breathable. Limited food sources,)
14(It DOESNT matter. The xeno are already down there.)
15(down there. THEYD track us down and kill us)
16(as spare pilots. THATS right in the middle of the)
17(combat option and it DIDNT go so well.)
18(to the task. But IVE seen automatons in the simulation bay)
19(beat the fastest human. THEYRE military-grade equipment.)
20(military-grade equipment. So LETS militarize one.)
21(Hedy: They DONT have combat capabilities.)
22(talked to one? It CANT tie its shoes without)
23(It cant tie ITS shoes without asking for more data.)
24(if we could find one, it WOULDNT understand what was going on.)
25(was going on. It WOULDNT be able to fight.)
26(able to fight. THEYRE just not capable of it.)
27(Alicja: ITS...no. Not entirely true. The Protocol makes them)
28(Without it, THEYRE vastly more capable.)
29(Valentina: ITS permanent?)
30(No, what I mean is; IM not allowed to.)
31(I cannot properly explain it to you without>>>missing ellipsis<<<)
32(than this? Right here? WERE about to become extinct.)
33(I will not do this! You DONT understand)
34(I will not do this! You dont understand>>>missing sentence-ender or ellipsis<<<)
35(Valentina: YOURE right, I dont understand.)
36(Youre right, I DONT understand. I dont think your husbandwhat was)
37(I dont understand. I DONT think your husbandwhat was his name?I dont)
38(your husbandwhat was his name?I DONT think hed understand either.)
39(was his name?I dont think HED understand either.)
40(Even if I wanted to, I DONT know how.)

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Missing spaces:
1(survivors will be dead in a few DAYSNOTHING we can do about that)

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1(answer your questions: IM sorry to say that no,)
2(sorry to say that no, I DONT have any additional support)
3(support I can provide, and yes, IM well aware that youll die in a few)
4(and yes, Im well aware that YOULL die in a few days if nothing changes.)
5(HERES what Im going to do:)
6(Heres what IM going to do:)
7(capital ship orbiting Jarilo. IM going to remotely ignite the)

8(going to remotely ignite the PORTHOSS main thrusters and) Target-word either has an unnecessary second 's' or is missing an apostrophe

9(Remember how I COULDNT activate the overrides on)
10(will detonate on impact. IM watching your ships internal)
11(internal video feed, and if I DONT see you doing this)
12(this in the next twenty minutes ILL start strobing the pressure)
13(if I do it right, ITLL cause nausea, convulsions and)
14(If I do it wrong, ITLL kill you.)
15(all the way down. I think THERES something noble about that.)
16(Just wait. This ship WONT even dent one of the xenos,)
17(of the xenos, and we DONT have enough reactionable mass to)
18(for a minute. This WONT get you what you want.)
19(No, I DONT think Ill hold on.)
20(No, I dont think ILL hold on. And Im only mildly)
21(hold on. And IM only mildly interested in whether or not)
22(I DONT like your ideas.)
23(Well, ok, you WONT like this one either, but)
24(ITS a gunship. Mostly intact.)
25(Val, I think WEVE established that our gunships cant)
26(that our gunships CANT do a whole lot against the xenos.)
27(against the xenos. WHATS your point?)
28(No, our pilots CANT do much. Now, look a quarter mile)

29(cant do much. Now, look a quarter>>> <<<mile further up that valley.) Missing hyphen

30(ITS one of the backup pilot automatons.)
31(pilot automatons. And ITS responding to pings.)
32(See? They DONT like your idea either.)
33(my grandmothers original notes. ITS not exactly the same as)
34(I CANT believe Alicja agreed to this.)
35(agreed to this. IVE worked with here for years.)
36(Sir, please DONT do this. Im a patriot, but)
37(please dont do this. IM a patriot, but this is just wrong.)
38(Even with all of her ITS immoral, theyre sentient guff,)
39(with all of her its immoral, THEYRE sentient guff, my grandmother never)

40(forefathers spent their own blood AN sweat building this venture.)

41(and get close enough to detect them>>> <<<) Missing sentence-ender or ellipsis

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Missing line space:
1(Youre going to get us all killed. Get in a lifepod now. Alicja: One more minute.) Alicja's response to Valentina is in the same line as Valentina's last sentence. Without the coloring of her name, this could be read as still part of Valentina's speech

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1(ITS done. The automaton just went into rebuild mode.)
2(check on the gunship, too. ITS battered but itll fly.)
3(gunship, too. Its battered but ITLL fly.)
4(but itll fly. THATS about it from our end.)
5(from our end. WERE down to four hours of oxygen.)
6(In ten minutes, WERE setting a course for the nearest cluster of)
7(Alicja DOESNT know. Running remotely over radiowave,)
8(Good. WELL be able to control it directly)
9(Not directly. THATS the hard part.)

10(follow orders, but withou THE Protocol we dont know how it'll) Target-word has been used as part of a title 'The Protocol' and not a definite article as used here, and thus should have the first letter capitalized |
11(without the Protocol we DONT know how it'll interpret them.)
12(give it motivation. THATS your job. Get creative.)
13(ITLL have no memory, right?)
14(No idea who it is or WHATS going on?)
15(contextual datasets, so ITLL be a total blank slate.)
16(total blank slate. ITLL be so eager to establish a context that)
17(Ok. We tell it ITS one of us. A human.)
18(a little bit subtle. ITS blank, not stupid.)
19(No. I think ITLL get shot down two minutes after it leaves)
20(leaves that asteroid. But ILL be dead months before, so what)
21(You DONT know that. The xenos could be keeping the others alive.)
22(and you do survive, IM still going to have you executed for treason)
23(seeing you in a few years. ILL be the one with the weaponized automaton)
24(Hedy: ITS one of the big ships. I can see it)
25(twelve degrees to starboard. They HAVENT grabbed me yet.)
26(Val: IM drifting a few thousands meters behind you.)
27(Hedy: I DONT even know if they can receive our signals.)
28(What data transfer? The AUTOMATONS already in full rebuild.)
29(nothing else we can do. YOURE going to get us all killed.)
30(Hedy: IM reading a power spike... I think they just)

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Missing spaces:
1(responds to the forbidden IMAGEAN automaton self-replicatingand your)
2(forbidden imagean automaton SELF-REPLICATINGAND your bosonic network reels.)

Typos:
1(Technicaly schematics. RODINAS planned velocities and trajectories.)
2(Perhaps by now YOUVE found even more on your own.)
3(You see it, but your memory WONT hold it. The Protocol responds)
4(included a firmware patch. I WONT mislead you: it is a drastic,)
5(retain most of your memory, but I DONT know how it will affect your)
6(wife on the day we met. THATS the password. If you want to be free, find Tavio.)
7(xenos you have to. The other humans DONT matter. Im not trading for Rodina,)
8(other humans dont matter. IM not trading for Rodina, or the Vanguard survivors,)
9(incredibly easy. Perhaps we DONT deserve to survive.)

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Missing spaces:
1(cooked by the deck's most famous young CHEFMYSELFSERVED on the finest china.)

Typos:
1(They keep me IN alone in a small chamber.) Unnecessary target-word
2(I had forgotten to go to >>>missing word 'the'<<< market and my cupboard was bare,) If the target-word was left out deliberately to imply Tavio is foreign, then this is characteristic dialogue, and not improper

Improper capitalizations: 0
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